I just watched your video.
First of all:
Cool video, nicely edited, even though i hated the music, but that might be my personal taste;)
now to the replays themselves. I think you should upload the replays too, because you should be judged by your driving, not your videomaking skill. And it's impossible to really comment on your driving based on that heavily edited video.
At least you stated your times at the end, where i have to ask you how long did you train for them? i guess not too long, both times are not bad, but not really that impressive. On both tracks my PB is more then 4 secs faster. So i think you should knock at least 3-3 secs off your times. When you can do this you prove two things:
-You can drive fast.
-You are willing and able to train if needed.
Especially the second one is important, to be Dvil you don't have the Kenji-ability to drive each track very fast on first try, but in league it's important to train consistently over a long period of time.
Maybe if we meet online i can give you some hints on the tracks (at least on snow, i hate stadium